Preliminary exercise learner response

 

teacher feedback

WWW:

You have displayed some excellent editing and technical skills throughout this preliminary exercise. Good soundtrack which establishes the fantasy genre element.


EBI:

The actual chase scene was disappointing. Ensure your actors are serious because there were moments of laughter when this was meant to be a serious confrontation between two characters. Consider who you cast in the real coursework brief.
      


reflection  

www  -  good soundtrack (adds to fantasy genre) 
          -  multiple characters
          -  two locations

ebi  -  add dialouge          
       -  longer chase 
       -  more camera shots            



Since doing the preliminary exercise I have learnt how to use match on action . This is when you show one movement from multiple different angles . Therefore, I can use it in my actual GCSE project ,this ensures i maximise the amount of marks I get in the exam                                                                                                               

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